lets write rhymes...

Tongue twisters,im gonna have to open a tongue twisters forum.

you know its hard when you type it , a large part of rhyme is how you say it i re read mine they sound like am crazy but i think it makes sense if you hear it lol

Thank you all.... It's funny now, this same aunt as above mentioned tells me she can't get over wat a good looking man I've turned out to be.....They all say that. I wasn't an abnormal looking child to bgin with, she just needed a punching bag.. As for my mother, I don't think she realized how bad those little naunts from my Aunt, messed my head up... As for the child molester, he was my other aunts son... Sick bastard ended up putting a bullet in his head last year... Im a 32 year old grown man now, The molesting ended when I was 14.. You grow up thinking it's your fault, but when you get older, you realize it wasn't your fault at all....When he killed himself, as much as I hate to say this, I felt relief,like a few cement blocks had been lifted off of my shoulders....Still to this day, I suffer from manic depression and low self esteem. I get tons of attention from woman,especially my wives friends....lol.... Makes me feel good for the moment but then quickly fades... Im sure there are a lot of people on here who have similar stories.. Just wanted to say, your not alone... I was stoned last night when I rambled this off and probably would have never wrote that sober....Thanks again for the kind words....

thought this was for writing rhymes not bringin up old memories.
everybody has skeletons that may not make sense to me.

the one that haunted me was gettin beat as a child
it made me wild made me kill em and just sit back and smile

now im the skeleton hidin in all of their closets
when i grew up i just blew up i swear i straight fuckin lost it

i can remember it like it was just yesterday tho
got the bullets got my gun and just unleashed on them hos

so dont get brought down by the memories that haunt you
dont let some faggot pussy nigga sit there and taunt you

instead YOU be the ghost that will be hauntin them
make them run cry and hide while you punishin THEM

one last thing to say before i finish my quote
dont let them niggas haunt you, YOU be the ghost.

and as always, stay smokey my friends

Superman44108 said:

thought this was for writing rhymes not bringin up old memories.
everybody has skeletons that may not make sense to me.

the one that haunted me was gettin beat as a child
it made me wild made me kill em and just sit back and smile

now im the skeleton hidin in all of their closets
when i grew up i just blew up i swear i straight fuckin lost it

i can remember it like it was just yesterday tho
got the bullets got my gun and just unleashed on them hos

so dont get brought down by the memories that haunt you
dont let some faggot pussy nigga sit there and taunt you

instead YOU be the ghost that will be hauntin them
make them run cry and hide while you punishin THEM

one last thing to say before i finish my quote
dont let them niggas haunt you, YOU be the ghost.

and as always, stay smokey my friends

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It is for rhymes.... But thats where a lot of pain comes out, when put into words , for me at least....Awesome rhyme man....

smokey mcsmokester said:

It is for rhymes.... But thats where a lot of pain comes out, when put into words , for me at least....Awesome rhyme man....

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i know bro i feel ya. and thanks

The burden of failure haunts my memory
I'm a smart guy
But a test just brought me to my knees.
It hurts deep inside
I can hardly breath.
I can't stand living with failure
It's a fuckin disease.
Now that I haven't smoked
In over a week
I really could use
Some super dank weed....

Always thought that I knew that they knew it was time
The shadows are here, and I'm ready to rhyme
Night is my preference, you can call me an owl
You see me twistin' my head and you're callin' it foul
Stars in the sky moving cause I'm so high
I'm bent on that kush and I feel like I can fly
T.H.C in my blood all day
20 a gram? Dealers want you to overpay
That's why I got my card, you see me going hard
I'm grabbin' ounces at a time and rhymin' like a bard
It's time to close it up, this shit is getting old
Just smoke some herb and you're mind will unfold

Even when you're talking about pain.
You should make it rhyme, it's the game.
Don't just break the rules because you,
want to speak of things that're true.
Keep up the rhyme's
With what's on your minds
That's the whole point,
This thread you anoint,
(I bet you thought I'd use joint )
With your words, and your time,
As long as they rhyme

I hit that blunt on the way to the show
Gotta do somethin, traffic was slow
Pulled up to the city, that it was in
Lit a new blunt, pulled that one in.
Found a spot, that wasn't too shady.
When we hopped out, we got hollered at by some lady
"Party" she said wavin her arms in the air
"Waitin for bud." That's why she was sittin there.
She said she couldn't get it ealier, and she had worked really hard.
But all I could tell her, is to go get her card.
She was parked by a clinic, watin for her dude.
I woulda helped her out, but I don't want to end up pig food.
So we walked on in, found a place to stand
And watched, and they introduced the first band
Shit just got crazy from there
The music they blared
All about smokin,
blunts had me chokin
Tonight I got high
Like really high
(I felt like I should be able to get away with that, considering what it says )

sittin chillin with my brother playin call a duty
mainly cause netflix wont let me watch a movie
so i got on them sticks im somethin these niggas cant fuck wit on tha slick im sick at this cod shit
this ones gonna be short cause im in game knockin niggas brains out they frame mayne

Just got dissed by PR
for being from Detroit
I was just making a joke
That guy needs a better joint
I wasn't trolling the 9 mile
name of the thread
but attitudes like that
is why people end up there dead

the beat drop, man it done gone drove me insane am a flow so hard you niggaz brains gon be in pain my consepts hit harder than a fraight train neva gonna stop gon do it again and again never bored got that do i liv life on the fast lane i stay high stay high like a fuckin tree if you look up nigga you kno you gon se me al day al day cuz thats where i be neva fake go hard like an oG

Blazin a vape
The marijuana makes
Stress hit the breaks
Fuck those snakes
they just fakes
Fuck the flakes
Makin mistakes
Them niggas I take
They fuckin fates
And make them taste
The fuckin grates

Trolls. They just Hate.

Hello to everyone baked.
I just vaped.
I gotta vape some more...so long whore !!!

If not who I am,
Then with everything I must
If i Turn left around a corner
It doesn't feel right
I adjust
Taking steps to proceed
Pay attention how
Without it i come with
A presidential POW
Fists full of fury
Martial arts before law
When my state takes a dive
I'll be sure to live through it all.

Rules of the street
rhyme of the beat
weight of my heat

boy thats all i kno
never got it easy but now i got a lot to show
shillin on a cloud, then i hear that sound
whats that , the money calling me
my kungfu betta bitch its better than jet lee
so don't be stressin me
be in that lambogin
smokin a stogy full of green
oh man don't i look mean
no one kno where i been
i been at the top baby feelin fresh and clean
am that thug am that doo boy am that machine
look at all my bling
hell ya my rap hit hot and hard like a choppa
am in that helicopter
cuz am the money doctor

I lay here beat down broken and bruised
you pass by me like a setting sun
you bring pale darkness to my void life
you defeat my hope of happiness
you remove me from my safety and my love
the cold you bring removes life from within
you make me crave death

happy monday

Today is Monday? I should have been to work 6 hours ago.
Fuck it drink a Faygo.
Punch my bitch in the asshole.
Pass the Old El Paso

I cant stand all of your rhyme schemes simplistic
ball gag in I rhyme better with a gimp lisp bitch
ordering seeds... from herbies drunk
yeah thats right... you heard me punks
I'm a goat with a hard on for wolf slash hot chick
half a globe away but you know I stash hot pics
of her flashin her ass in a thongs sayin my name
Sacrificin goats so fast, this aint a game
Filling up the spank bank with the super speed
Fill up a fat skank with my super seed
Bust so hard shoot the condom to her uterus
beat the pussy up with my furious super dick
leave a false name and a wrong number bitch
now she all tore up, numb and stuck with a twitch
Dippin out the back door never gon see me again
but god knows she gonna tell all of her friends...