The Undercover Stoner??

qwizoking

qwizoking

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John Kitchen said:
I've been keeping up with his shit lately. Wrote some wild shit for Cannabis.net, now he's gone lone ranger, gun slingin' on his own.

It's relatable, funny content that makes me think about bigger issues. Anyway, I think it's funny as hell.

This is the intro article on his blog. :-D

http://theundercoverstoner.typepad.com/the_undercover_stoner/
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I worked up the energy and made it through the opening disclaimer.. Barely.

I then made it to..fuck you, your cool








Terrible
 
Bublonichronic

Bublonichronic

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Your lucky John you been blessed by the king, you are now cool....you should thank qk appropriatly as you were headed to the shitbox in the corner otherwise
 
John Kitchen

John Kitchen

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Well, I'm about to take a walk in the outback.

Danger will robinson.

As they say in bourke, Doin'? (AKA, sup with you?)
 
John Kitchen

John Kitchen

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qwizoking said:
I worked up the energy and made it through the opening disclaimer.. Barely.

I then made it to..fuck you, your cool








Terrible
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll pass on your sentiments.

I think the best feedback is negative actually.

That being said, break it down. What points could be improved on?

Did you like any of it?

Is it simply the style of writing you don't like, or do you honestly think the whole thing is rubbish?


If you don't like the style,The UCS would like your honest opinion on the article, "What would you say if the police tried to prevent you from seeing your mother because of a marijuana charge," and deliver some feedback? It's a completely different air, but talent is honed into skill off the back of harsh critique right?

Not trying to spam at all, So forgive my entry into this forum. I am actually looking for feedback, and none will be knocked back.
 
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