Devildog93
Well-Known Member
Same here. Took me about 4 reads to get the story. Punctuation is gooooooooooood. And I totally was like "Cantokez is a bitch if some dealer came over and said that about his GF."That shit was so hard to read. Use a lil punctuation please. And like I have to tell my wife constantly, it's confusing when you say "she" or "they" when your telling a story cuz I dont know which person(s) your talking about. I'm just sayin. Anyways, after 3 reads I finally understood what happened. It was funnier to me when I thought your GF was the one getting told lol.
But I got it after a few more reads.