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Miyagi

Miyagi

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A Burning Suspicion

Today a fire burns within
The blood that fills my veins
Its heat contained beneath my skin
Its tongues lick at my brain

My thoughts are turned to vapour
My emotions set to boil
Am I alone in wondering why
A love cannot be loyal?

The smoke fills every niche in me
And drifts upon the heat
To where I should think sensibly
Echoes of doubt repeat

The questions make me furious
They somehow feed the blaze
Uncertain if I'm curious
Or cant forgive those days

I'd like to quench the fire's thirst
Before I get too rash
But I think it may kill me first
And all they'll find is ash
 
Miyagi

Miyagi

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Hey wizard mate... I find your style challenging to read and and understand, so it's hard for me to like sometimes but I try hard to get it and see some profound stuff in there... This is NOT a criticism of you, it is a criticsm of ME and I am working hard on it! Please give me some more stuff to work on! Hope ya feel me...

Everyone else keep it up too but wiz you are challenging me the most.
 
0calli

0calli

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Miyagi said:
To march Alone

Never have I seen the sun
Shining over old zion
So grit my teeth and set my jaw
And make my way like those before

For those of us not marked by birth
Must march and toil to prove our worth
With human feet and human hands
We try to live as best we can

And human hearts cry out for love
While human eyes still search above
For answers this lone man can't find
When mortal eyes have been struck blind

My humble dreams are all denied
While human rights are sanctified
Though my rejection left me burned
I know that all I have I earned!
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0calli

0calli

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some of cana's stuff you gotta be gangster to get and some of his stuff u need an alter state of mind to see his perception ....................me im lucky my mind was always an altered state since i can remember !!!!

but all in all i love his stuff because it make you dream while awake if you let it
 
Miyagi

Miyagi

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As you May/may not be able to tell, my poetry seems to flow FROM structure. There is often as much or more significance in the number of lines/syllables/words/stanzas etc or the shape of it than as there is to the words. As such Cannawizard bends my mind into shapes it didn't originally like but as I put thought into structure where most will never see, does the same thought go into how all those squiggles spell a word, for example? I suspect so, it is like telling a story, as a poem, with pictures and if I can, I'm going to work that shit out!
 
5000joints

5000joints

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Hey, Miyagi son. Your very close to finding God. Very Close. Search for the answers you seek and you will find them. Just like I did. I will pray that God touches your heart in a special way.
 
0calli

0calli

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I never said u cudnt understand it it just you have to have been to some places in your life to realise what he is talking about thats all the story is in the meaning of the word ,,,,,,,,,,that is in its own right up for individual interpretation by the reader
miyagi said:
as you may/may not be able to tell, my poetry seems to flow from structure. There is often as much or more significance in the number of lines/syllables/words/stanzas etc or the shape of it than as there is to the words. As such cannawizard bends my mind into shapes it didn't originally like but as i put thought into structure where most will never see, does the same thought go into how all those squiggles spell a word, for example? I suspect so, it is like telling a story, as a poem, with pictures and if i can, i'm going to work that shit out!
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Miyagi

Miyagi

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5000joints said:
Hey, Miyagi son. Your very close to finding God. Very Close. Search for the answers you seek and you will find them. Just like I did. I will pray that God touches your heart in a special way.
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Haha thanks, I need all the good words I can get. Most of these poems are from many moons ago, :) I have found and lost Him many times since then! These days I am very zen, I have placed my life entirely in the hands of circumstance (God if you will) and be sure I always have what I need when I need it. But this is a poetry thread, I won't fill it up with philosophy, although I'd love to have that discussion sometime:)
 
Miyagi

Miyagi

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0calli said:
I never said u cudnt understand it it just you have to have been to some places in your life to realise what he is talking about thats all the story is in the meaning of the word ,,,,,,,,,,that is in its own right up for individual interpretation by the reader
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I think we crossed our wires there somewhere buddy! I was just elaborating.

Anyway here's a poem, probably one of if not my fave... one of my most complex rhyme schemes and poignant to boot!
 
Miyagi

Miyagi

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THERMALS​
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O to be free from what binds me to earth and past and pain​
To soar above on wings of love into the morning rain​
To feel the dew forming anew on silky golden plumes​
And know today I’m far away from my impending doom​
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To have my head held high instead of bearing heavy brows​
And dream only of what may be within the hear and now​
No future cares to beg my prayers and sap my strength of will​
To dance so proud among the clouds and relish in the thrill​
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Let all the men speed by again like ants beneath my span​
And let them keep their world of sheep for their not in my plans​
For those that dream of golden beams far brighter than the sun​
May soon take flight and see the light I shine on everyone​
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And though it’s far I’d race our star across the lands below​
And chase the moon like any loon, my sanity in tow​
No hate or greed or things I need for there I could be free​
And Monday morn when their forlorn it won’t mean shit to me!​
 
5000joints

5000joints

New Member
I was smoking on a fattie
of some proper A-Game,
Watching History channel
when it was getting kinda lame.

I gently rubbed my nose
and then took a hit,
Next thing I know
theres a booger on my lip.

A booger on my lip
A booger on my lip,
I cant believe smokin weed
put a booger on my lip.

Now its stuck to my finger
and Im trying to flick it,
The booger wont come off
and I cant unstick it.

I didnt mean for this to happen
it was just a little itch
I cant believe smoking weed
put a booger on my lip.

A booger on my lip
A booger on my lip,
I cant believe smoking weed
put a bugger on my lip.

A booger on my lip
A booger on my lip,
I didnt mean for this to happen
I was trying to take a hit.

A booger on my lip
A booger on my lip
I cant believe smoking weed
Put a booger on my lip!
 
0calli

0calli

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Ohh no you mistook me I'm Pretty much explaining my thought nothing towards you in any way at all buddy srry poor choice of word meshing lol on my behalf
Miyagi said:
I think we crossed our wires there somewhere buddy! I was just elaborating.

Anyway here's a poem, probably one of if not my fave... one of my most complex rhyme schemes and poignant to boot!
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