lets write rhymes...

[ML75]

Dont let the man control your life
he follows rules that cut like knife
take in that smoke that sweetness smell
and tell the man to go to hell

my lungs burn -- the burn we like
getting me high just for the night
next morn we see with groggy sight
and calm our day for another fight

dont tell me bad how I live my gift
and listen to music that lets my mind drift
im not a criminal but tagged I am
by closed minds that point as with friends I jam

go play your life and fill your need
and leave me alone with my innocent weed
dont gaze on me with eyes saying sin
its my choice to take my medicine

you label us bums as you look down on us
while you carry your smile hiding its lust
8 tins you drink, could even be twelve
in that brown bag, your shaky hands delve

I grew a plant
is that so bad
you would take my freedom
and inside feel glad?

you wont stop my love for my green that I toke
I dont break the law, all I do is smoke

 

[Urca]

im getting tired of the poems dealing with weed
seriously. write about weed if you have some originality, but you all write the same things in the same ways, no offense. even the posts between shannon and harvey were more enjoyable, because it wasnt the same tired lines of defiance and toking

 

[bigbillyrocka]

No bad vibes tho, we still are pressing "like" on one another's posts. Lol but it's good to see others still posting

 

[Urca]

lol should i try to write another one?

 

[bigbillyrocka]

I needed some green to
Puff like a dragon
Planted my seed
This stuff is stronger
Then I'd ever imagine!
Takes so long
But the wait is all worth it
When you raise your little tree
Cuttin it can be drastic.
With every little snip
I felt sweat roll down my eye
But once it was ready
It was time to get so high

 

[bigbillyrocka]

lol should i try to write another one?

try? lol. yeah u should.

 

[Urca]

you, and your mind
your lost so hard to define
hiding in the darkness
still waters run deep
and the secrets that you keep
so shallow
like puddles across the land scape


sorry, i dont know you
or the things that you've been through
cant help you, cant save you
from the nothingness inside
from your lack of pride

keep those lips sealed tight
your secrets are for yourself
i dont want to hear you whine
go to someone else and cry

 

[Shannon Alexander]

I knew her once, only once, now she eludes me
I hear the voices, 'she's here..!' trying to delude me
denude me of all that I am and once was in strength
let down, time and again, smothered with lies
She's over here, she's over there, nothing but lies
thinking maybe she'll arrive if I cover my eyes
in darkness I await her return to my side
In peace I wait, knowing that I have tried
She never comes, she just isn't any more
So I turn from her scent and I darken the door
of the ones that are known by many a name
all beautiful flowers but I must refrain
I am on the search for that single perfect one
My soul aches for you, my moon, my sun

 

[Urca]

Tell me how this works?
Must worse turn worse?
How much can it hurt?
If you shoot in the dark
and barely miss my heart?

The memory of you
Still reddens my cheeks
the memory of you
still prevents sleep

I would have given
Anything for you
I would have given
everything to you

But thats just how it works
And hurt begets hurt
And I drew to close to your flame
All the while it was a game

Playing with fire gets you burned
Wanting your heart left me spurned
How much did you see
When you shot your arrow into me?

 

[bigbillyrocka]

im getting tired of the poems dealing with weed
seriously. write about weed if you have some originality, but you all write the same things in the same ways, no offense. even the posts between shannon and harvey were more enjoyable, because it wasnt the same tired lines of defiance and toking

you remember names. lol.

 

[Urca]

you remember names. lol.

lol i remember lots of things, I have a very good memory. Btw, how am i doing on the poems? Not too bad I hope?

 

[bigbillyrocka]

not at all. my headaches getting in the way for me at the moment. yours are good.

 

[Shannon Alexander]

Tell me how this works?
Must worse turn worse?
How much can it hurt?
If you shoot in the dark
and barely miss my heart?

The memory of you
Still reddens my cheeks
the memory of you
still prevents sleep

I would have given
Anything for you
I would have given
everything to you

But thats just how it works
And hurt begets hurt
And I drew to close to your flame
All the while it was a game

Playing with fire gets you burned
Wanting your heart left me spurned
How much did you see
When you shot your arrow into me?

This really hit home, And I can relate to what you wrote here 100%

 

[Urca]

This really hit home, And I can relate to what you wrote here 100%

Im sorry you had to go thorugh something like what I wrote. it has to suck.

as for harvey, I have like 30 or more than I have edited, personally I want to publish but I dont know how

 

[bigbillyrocka]

go to yahoo then sign up on contributor. follow the steps. youll make "performance" money as the number of views grow. thats your first step.

 

[bigbillyrocka]

as im sitting in a dark room
i notice a beacon of light
though its dimly lit like
a cigarette in the night.
no smells permeate
the bars basement walls
sippin my drink i hear a whisper
its you that has called.
as im walking over
i quickly adjust and realize
that my love just grew fonder
just by staring in your eyes..

 

[Urca]

whats that supposed to do?

 

[bigbillyrocka]

its a big network of contributing writers. you can choose to put any of your poems out there, short stories etc that you want published. news articles even and can make money off it while making a name for yourself.

 

[Finshaggy]

I cant stand all of your rhyme schemes simplistic
ball gag in I rhyme better with a gimp lisp bitch
ordering seeds... from herbies drunk
yeah thats right... you heard me punks
I'm a goat with a hard on for wolf slash hot chick
half a globe away but you know I stash hot pics
of her flashin her ass in a thongs sayin my name
Sacrificin goats so fast, this aint a game
Filling up the spank bank with the super speed
Fill up a fat skank with my super seed
Bust so hard shoot the condom to her uterus
beat the pussy up with my furious super dick
leave a false name and a wrong number bitch
now she all tore up, numb and stuck with a twitch
Dippin out the back door never gon see me again
but god knows she gonna tell all of her friends...

How is yours any different
The flow even went the same as ours went...

 

[bigbillyrocka]

Zoinks shaggy, you might get into a write off like me! lol