Next Generation Pot Head Skater Rapper

[AlternateEgo]

[video=youtube;I1eHJEuX0n8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I1eHJEuX0n8[/video] I posted this video In a different thread with the intention of discussing upcoming rappers. This thread is for you to talk about my video and discuss whether its shit or not basically. Please enjoy!

 

[tip top toker]

I kept quiet in the other thread out of respect but since you are asking for criticisms good or bad, i have to say that it is shit. Rap is not my preferd choice, but i like this and that, but with music it's more foten than not about the music, the sound, not what is being said, and as such, i just don't find anything of interest going on behind the lyrics, gotta be a balance of balancing your lyrics with your melody.

 

[a dog named chico]

Hey i made it to .30 before i stopped it...a new best for your music. That being said i enjoy rap music quite a bit...your subject matter is a little off IMO...

 

[dirtsurfr]

I never liked rap and after hearing this I really hate rap...
If music is in your blood try sumthin eles,
Maybe get a job in a ice cream shop and sing a rap song about ice cream or
are you only into talking sht?

 

[SSHZ]

I'd say you better finish high school and get a job because you are talentless...........

 

[AlternateEgo]

hm i guess some just dont understand the lyrics ask me to explain any of my lyrics I gladly will my lyrics are good shit

 

[DarthD3vl]

no dude, i think people get them, there super simple. like a nursery rhyme, the thing is its sooo trite.

every fucking kid in my city thinks they can rap... and the thing is... no one tells them the truth. sorry bro. if its your dream you can only take this critism and push harder, write lyrics of value. stuff that if it wasn't a rap song, people would still want to here it.

thug rap is over any ways, its not 1993 any more. Pimp C is dead. Ice cube is making family tv now... Xhibit is on extreme home make over or what ever. snoop coaches a little leage football team... for real, that shit has passed..

 

[AlternateEgo]

how is it like a nursery rhyme your a little hmm dumb, All my rhymes are ill, We Burnin Grapes they fruitless .....We burning purple weed they ain't got shit.. just an example you must take every lyric completely literally. Smoking fuzzy kitten nuggets look like a gorilla .... Smoking fuzzy nuggets of weed they so fuzzy and big like gorillas.
Learn how to think on a higher level

 

[tontoboy]

omfg this is hilarious, and then this shit

Learn how to think on a higher level

it hurts to laugh this hard

subscribed and grabbing popcorn




yay 100th post for me

 

[AlternateEgo]

if im so shit what artist do you listen to so I can rate your listening ability, I love pimp c all of UGK shit, I also like eminem, mystical, busta

 

[ganjames]

This is no different than the rest of the suburban white boys who think they're hard.

Rapping about pussy money weed by day..
Mother tucking you into bed by night..

 

[TigerClock]

Pass that popcorn this way!

 

[tip top toker]

if im so shit what artist do you listen to so I can rate your listening ability, I love pimp c all of UGK shit, I also like eminem, mystical, busta

Listening ability? You know taste is subjective yeah, and when the majority don't like something it doesn't matter what your taste, sorry, ability is, the majority think it's shit.

 

[upthearsenal]

This is just another case of a white kid wanting to be little wayne or whatever. "talking shit I get the clip and tell the gun ta finish it".... are you fucking serious? I don't see how you can't expect people to think this is fucking stupid. If you are trying to be as shitty as little wayne, you're doing a fucking fine job.

There much better rap/hip-hop out there with real lyrics, that show you the depth of the artist. This just shows me you know how to copy a shit rapper.

 

[ledgrowing]

your lyrics are crap and some dont even make senseb

 

[keepitcoastal]

thats just some weak unsophisticated rap that gives a bad name to all hiphop and rap.
its all about the underground

http://youtu.be/q7RvkMzhX_o

 

[benny blanco]

Lmao I don't even need to hear this song, I wasted 20 seconds of my life on his other nonsense

 

[SSHZ]

"Learn to think on a higher level"........ LOL

Boy, you have a lot to learn. Not everyone on here is a punk ass like yourself. Kids today take the easy way out and think cause they can rhyme, curse and where their pants at their knees- they are rappers with a future. Check back with us in a few years when "you're living in a van down by the river".

 

[DarthD3vl]

Son... i live in screwston. there are a million amature's like you just down the block from me, you have rhythm, thats it. but even that was basic rhythm.....

i dont listen to rap any more, i grew up. but i am a musicain and work at a recording studio... and a million kids come in daily, with shit just like this... Sorry, you asked for critism that you cant handle. im not trying to make you feel bad, im giving you an honest opinion.

 

[AlternateEgo]

Hhaah yall are funy rapping is a hobby, yall take my shit so serious lol, I tuck my own ass in and yeah I live at home and go to school with a gpa 3.0+ also I can own a gun just as much as anyone can do to the second amendment. And when was the last time you ever heard a rapper doing everything they say its entertainment bitch. LOl if you are so smart go write a song and rap it for me Id love to see your "skills", and i am not mad just laughing over here. work in a studio my ass what the towel boy haha