LedZeppelin8906
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Hey all, I have been thinking about writing for the past couple of months. I have several ideas, I think im going to include elements from the Silent Hill series, specifically Silent Hill 1 and Silent Hill 4: The Room and Room 1408 the short story / film. The story is inspired by RIU, because the main character, like myself will be a stoner. I have only just started, so ill give you a rough draft of the first paragraph, please, be gentle I am no Stephen King 
The details are kind of vague because I havent figured them out yet, such as the name of the City and such...
I watched closely as smoke rose from the red burning ember and drifted weightless into the sky. For a brief second forming a dense cloud with a striking resemblence to nebulae. I took a second inhale of my cigarette
and exhaled watching closely; a strong gust of wind dissappated the smoke quickly. I sighed deeply and stood to stretch; What's taking her so long? I was waiting for my girlfriend Kali to arrive and tell me good news. For the past few months my friends and I have been searching for an apartment to rent in another city; we had just put a deposit down on a promising apartment near the downtown area. I sat back down and shifted my weight uncomfortably; inhaling periodically the sharp pain in my back turned to a gentle numb sensation.
again, just a rough draft so be gentle
edit: I realize this is in the wrong forum, but I thought maybe I could get more opinions here since the Inspired art forum is basically dead right now
The details are kind of vague because I havent figured them out yet, such as the name of the City and such...I watched closely as smoke rose from the red burning ember and drifted weightless into the sky. For a brief second forming a dense cloud with a striking resemblence to nebulae. I took a second inhale of my cigarette
and exhaled watching closely; a strong gust of wind dissappated the smoke quickly. I sighed deeply and stood to stretch; What's taking her so long? I was waiting for my girlfriend Kali to arrive and tell me good news. For the past few months my friends and I have been searching for an apartment to rent in another city; we had just put a deposit down on a promising apartment near the downtown area. I sat back down and shifted my weight uncomfortably; inhaling periodically the sharp pain in my back turned to a gentle numb sensation.
again, just a rough draft so be gentle
edit: I realize this is in the wrong forum, but I thought maybe I could get more opinions here since the Inspired art forum is basically dead right now
