You know, if it were me I would just mount the fans right up on top of the holes blowing OUT of the tent. For two reasons: Those fans are meant to PULL air, not push it through your duct. Secondly, the hottest air is going to be in the TOP of the tent (which is why the holes are there) not in the middle where you have placed the fans.
So aside from getting rid of that dryer duct, it will actually do a better job. Not to mention the fans will run faster from having less resistance. If light escaping is an issue, then at least shorten your dryer duct and point it UP towards the ceiling.